If you are here, you know what this is supposed to be.

Download the story pdf here: Polaroid [Draft 3]

Download the reflective essay here: Polaroid [reflective essay]

Also, to make everyone’s life’s easier, here are the main points from the reflective essay:

-I removed several scenes in order to focus more on character motivation

-I reorganized the story in order to clarify what is going on (the whole concept I mentioned about withholding information from the reader). I tried to make it so people can actually understand it.

-The story no longer has a “reveal” moment. Instead, it’s just showing how the main character simply doesn’t want to accept his lies.

-Changed tenses in order to keep timelines simple.